In the garden I found a key.It was a funny shaped key.I went around town looking for a key hole that it would fit in.I had no luck.One day we went on vacation.I brought the key there.Where we were staying I found a clubhouse.I looked in the clubhouse,it needed some cleaning.So I cleaned it out the next day.Under the rug in the clubhouse there was a secret door.It had a lock so I knew I couldn't go in.Just then I remembered my key.I took it out and put it in the key hole.It fit!I opened the door and went inside.It was beautiful.But,also scary.I walked around and I heard something talking.It gave me directions to a room.I went to the room and opened the door.Everybody said suprise!I totally forgot about my birthday!It was the best birthday ever.They said that it was all planned for me.They put the key in the garden.I wonder how they came up with a suprise party like that.It was the best vacation ever!The End.By Rebecca Bennett
Monday, June 19
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6 comments:
Becca, I think that was really the key to my heart. Nice story!
thanks for sharing another story, Becca! Very cute!
i'm thinking that just might weird me out, if the key worked i wouldn't go in. good stuff becca!
A mystery with a happy ending! I liked your story.
Thanks for the comments.
Tim- thanks for saying that. I thought that was cool.
Moses- I thought your comment was funny.
Georgia and Jeni- I really liked your comments. They were nice.
The Jaybird comments were from me (Becca), I forgot to put my name on the end. :-)
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